TEST
Subject of drawing
JEREMY:
Hello, Helen. Sorry I’m late.
HELEN:
Hi, Jeremy, no problem. Well we’d better work out where we are on our project, I suppose.
JEREMY:
Yeah. I’ve looked at the drawings you’ve done for my story, ‘The Forest’, and I think they’re
brilliant – they really create the atmosphere I had in mind when I was writing it.
HELEN:
I’m glad you like them.
JEREMY:
There are just a few suggestions I’d like to make.
HELEN:
Go ahead.
JEREMY:
Now, I’m not sure about
the drawing of the cave – it’s got trees all around it
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, which
is great, but the drawing’s a bit too static, isn’t it? I think it needs some action.
HELEN:
Yes, there’s nothing happening. Perhaps I should add the boy – Malcolm, isn’t it? He would
be walking up to it.
JEREMY:
