Units 19-20
Firstly, both men and women have qualities which
are important for bringing up and educating children.
These qualities are not specific to men or women,
therefore both genders are able to raise children
successfully. By saying that childcare is a specific
female role, children will receive a m essage which
portrays women as carers only. For example, young
g irls who are taught to believe that the place of women
is in the home may not try hard in school subjects
which are more male dominated, such as science.
Secondly, the role of women in the workplace has
changed significantly in the last fifty years. Many
wom en now hold senior positions in many areas of
employment. Women contribute a range of skills to the
workplace which are both valuable and important. In
my opinion, women should continue to focus on their
careers and ensure that their daughters are aware of
the opportunities which are available to them in life.
Men should also take on som e of the responsibility of
childcare and teach their so n s that this is a valuable
role in society for men as well as women.
In conclusion, it is important that men and women
share childcare duties because both genders have
important qualities and skills. However, wom en and
men should also be allowed to focus on their careers
and provide strong role m odels for children.
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